its great! lighting and shading are good. I can see that shes slouching, though. also those 3 black lines coming out of her mouth. is she about to vomit (please be rainbows) something? or is she yelling? besides that, its pretty good. I like the hair shine and the highlights in the eyes. and the shading under the bangs, too. now I can tell you my other crique or whatever its called.

is ther really a difference between berserk and bloosem or is just when blossom gets mad? and how 'bout ice cream. it isn't made with CREAM its made made with MILK. and there is no ICE in the CREAM. sure it requires ice to make the cream but THERE IS NO ICE OR CREAM is there. I wrote that just to reach a hundred